Thursday, December 25, 2008

Pain Comments

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Pain is like a blade piercing threw your heart

No mater how hard you try it doesn't go away
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miranda sarlund
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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

Yes. That is the pain of a broken heart. It stays with you. The only problem I have with this piece is the line spacings. There should be no spacings. It really disrupts the reading. GW62

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Jacob Courtney 11 January 2009

you speak of pain in your heart. Yes it does just sit there for all time never healing never going away. very good job.

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