Friday, November 14, 2008

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take the pain i give
Take the pain i live
The blood runs down these old walls
Everything you know and love just falls
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Ina Davila
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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 November 2008

Painful! written beautifully! ......10+++

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Billy Joe Collins 14 November 2008

good poem thanks for sharing

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Ina Davila

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