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Dear Pallvi i must say its really adoreable Regards Yas

Varied emotions expressed wonderfully. Loved this poem. Thanks.

Here you have come up with a much better piece... Truly expressed... Keep up the good work... Regards, Kamran

a good write on mixed feelings of love...of happiness and confusion...welldone, Pallvi 10

one thing can be said - somethings better be left unsaid.... nice one.. :)