Pain Comments

I liked it, thanks for sharing with us! ! !

Well, I promise you that it gets better. It is a good effort and good to start with shorter poems like these... think of images that can describe the feelings you have and weave them into your poems and you will see how practise makes perfect! ! ! Don't stop writing. Yuri*

This write is one 'raw' show of painful emotion, Thank you for sharing, Emi