Thursday, May 15, 2008

'Pain' Comments

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This pain I feel I can no longer Stomach
its crying out for help but I won't let it leave
She's bottled up and can't get out,
she speaks as if she taking over me but she can't leave
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 May 2008

well written...........good poem

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Avery Watts 15 May 2008

i love your poem. it's sappy yet brave

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