Pain Comments

These are the sincere words of a secretive soul. A soul that is suffering. Perhaps a pain that is becoming too much to endure. It needs to escape somehow. Though I don't see it happening here. At least not anytime soon. A great reading, by the way. GW62

Quite a bit of emotion. You can almost feel it. Very cool Rabbit

a continuous flow of words that can go intrinsic the mind. i love this piece

This in particular has wordings that like Fiona said, 'breathtaking'. Diliberate and purelu thought. Nice :) !

wow now this is simply breathtaking in its phrasing Vanessa...beautiful thank you...Fi 10+++

Nice Poem Good write

a catharsis of pain...end over...this guy needs a 'Gun In The Blueberry Pie'

I like how you express your self! it is a sad poem but yet theres something importend in it, a very well written poem! !