Sunday, March 23, 2008

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Inspiration: Worst Spring Break

Days gone by no call, no text
Worried, scared, thoughts in my mind
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Donny Pascal
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Cathleen Hodgkinson 21 July 2008

I agree with Stephanie...being so young is the worst, being in love so young brings out such true desperation...As you become older, you will gain a better perspective even though at times you will still have sorrow and pain...you'll be able to sort out these feelings...Hang in there and keep writing...you are a poet.-Cathy

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Stephanie J. Demartino 21 July 2008

Such sorrow coming out. Being young is so hard. When you reach your thirties, you will not feel this way anymore.

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ngaio beck 20 July 2008

I am just a barracks, barroom, pool hall poet.As such I don't give advice.Sorry! I will say this however, 'If poetry is the art of transforming your deepest feeling to paper and ink, you are a poet'.

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