Sunday, November 4, 2012

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a pain so profound that I cannot name it
I try to ignore it, but I'm forced to claim it
It's a gut wrenching sorrow that only grows
An affliction that absolute misery knows
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Kim Hilliker
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2018

There's dejection in every breath that I take And torment controls every move that I make Love has abandoned me and pulverized my heart... abandonment, pain and suffering very well expressed with so many examples. a fine poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2017

An insightful portrayal of the agony of life at its lowest ebb, elegantly penned in beautiful rhyme scheme from the heart with conviction. Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of the language. Awesome! Thanks for sharing Kim.

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