I have a pain so profound that I cannot name it
I try to ignore it, but I'm forced to claim it
It's a gut wrenching sorrow that only grows
An affliction that absolute misery knows
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An insightful portrayal of the agony of life at its lowest ebb, elegantly penned in beautiful rhyme scheme from the heart with conviction. Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of the language. Awesome! Thanks for sharing Kim.
There's dejection in every breath that I take And torment controls every move that I make Love has abandoned me and pulverized my heart... abandonment, pain and suffering very well expressed with so many examples. a fine poem. tony