Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Pain Comments

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Pain
Pain over here pain over there
Pain in my heart pain in my soul
Pain in my mind
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brittney keith
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Khushal Ahmed 16 May 2012

pain is life life is nil without it pain give depth to life pain is storm but storm is nice nicer than idolness it gives depth to soul pain help realise our fault even then pain is curse hated the most

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Jt Kaniarz 26 September 2011

Heartbreaking and tragic I think many of us can relate to

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Mona Martinez 06 March 2009

wow, nicely written. love the way you started and ended. pain comes from everywhere but, the difference is the way you let it affect you. you can let it get the best of you or you can let the pain in the world make you stronger. it always your choice. great job! ! !

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wow that was awesome! ! really loved it you expressed yourself so well i could feel it. thanx

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Shawn Dixon 07 April 2008

i like ur poem its ausome keep tryin

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Emo Seb 10 March 2008

hey...awesome! ! Seb

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Jay Bigger 05 March 2008

i like your poems alot cause you express your feelings, thats why i started writing mine, i found it easy to express emotions, i enjoy your style of writing good luck

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