Pain
Pain over here pain over there
Pain in my heart pain in my soul
Pain in my mind
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I enjoyed this poem. Through it all, continue to keep your head up. Thanks for sharing. I give this a 10 rating!
Pain comes in many different forms and the worst I believe is when someone has been taken from you in separation. May things have truly turned for you and I hope there is true positives in your life. Thank You
Simply mind-blowing. Every word expresses the pain the poet is going through. Something that every sensitive soul can relate to.10
So intense the PAIN-A-TIC poem. Rather the writing could be the manifesto of PAINICISM! .....Well exposed. Thanks.
Seems you have gone through a lot of pain in life. Sad drop. Nicely written.
pain is a poem about pain which has to suffer by the person effected the pain on much discomfort. A good poem.
You must been through alot but dont worry i have too just remember that ur storm is almost over hold ur head up
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what a poem and this feeling is also matching to my feellings thanks for shareing i like you'r way to form you'r feeling in a lucid way or in short
lost for words... one word brilliant - well two- brilliant poem! ! !
Let me give you something to think about. Killing ones self is a permonant solution to a temporary problem. thanks for sharing
Being alive makes a person sensitive to the world, you will feel everything that touches your emotions: love, hate, happiness, sadness, and even pain itself! But ending it for good is not reasonable at all, let destiny takes care of it! Thanks for sharing, a 10.
Awe inspiring poem depicting motley manifestations of pains. If pain is like a dark night, it must be followed by dawn of happiness, as a rule of the nature. An excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.