Pain Comments

I still you are many others favorite, as well as mine. your words always draw the reader in and compell them to read over and over, wanting more. such greatness in your pen.

It is amazing. reads perfectly. read it thrice. good piece

This is a good to the heart poem it got to me man you know your stuff... keep writing Pain of love

Mission Accomplished, truly my friend... I browsed through your poetry just looking for something that others hadn't taken a real shining to or notice of that I might. Not surprising that there is not one of your pieces that hasn't truly touched its readers... Beautiful stuff my friend, even when it's about... Pain Be Well

you can surely write my friend....you did a nice job there expressing your feelings. splendid.

You achieved your goal of expressing pain in a rhyme in way that cannot be matched, a lovely write of the tragic ''rejected love''...thnx

Alas my dear Greenwolfe... the lesson of acceptance. What pains you? Her absence or her rejection? The loss of her or the denial of you? Are the demons in your dreams hunting you or are you hunting them? I Like!

i spent along time looking for a poem that i could relate to when it came to the pain i feel.. i started writing about my pain as well but this poem said it all .. i found the poem i've been looking for... ~debra

i admire your work. very talented individual with deep thought u are. stay blessed. :)

Writing of pain in rhyme - what a task, but you have executed it very well. Nicely done!

A beautiful piece of work and a very well crafted expression of pain. Best wishes, Andrew

Very original idea for a poem: a task to write in rhyme about pain. Well done.

this poem is great. i can relate to it in some ways........

awesome poem..this will definitely go to my favorite lists..luckily i cant vote because it would be unfair to just give this a 10...

Dear mr.Greenwolfe Another outstanding work of art with a responsibility. Good work Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

wonderful piece. pain i identify with. i strive you even reach your level

painful poem....well written...

I agree with Dee, good work.

Amazing! ! I admire your ability to make thoughts flow so easily on paper! Hugs, Dee

wow this was a really great poem ilove the rhyme and it was just amazing, it was beautiful and i loved it.~Hazel