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a beautiful piece, Luwi. keep it up.

Nice piece, Luwi. we go through pains, but it gets us purified.

Dear Habte, I like the way the poem surges like a wave and recedes but doesnot end there, and comes back again. Joshua

Through these lines I can see the poetic personality of a young lady growing! Keep writing! -Raj

Watch as I have to look Looking as I have to understand Understanding as I have to accept Accepting as I have to face facing as I have to pretend Pretending as I have to be up on ahead Being up on ahead as I have to stay apart Staying apart as I will never face any body Will never facing any body as I have to live alone Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch I believe that this short poem is the best poem of all poetry because here you being mature teacher, presented things in two inter related variables and proud that every thing come with the help or the effect of other thing.. great job you did here..inspiring work..really well done dear poetry firend for that much sweet poetry and meaningful thoughts..appreciate you much 10/10

the style of expression seems something new! fine! 10+

Push-pull type with nimbleness of cascade Ten+ Ms Nivedita UK

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

nice poem... thanks for sharing, i enjoyed reading it

I like the structure you have created luwi, it is an excellent read and profound poem, well done,10.

Beautiful piece. Liked a lot. Nicely penned. wonderful. deserves 10+

Luwi life is a lesson that is very true. a very nice one.

'Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch' Beautiful. Lovely poem. Expressed well. Thanks for sharing with me 10+

Definitely from the heart luwi, your emotion pours from within to create this excellent share of your life's reflection...10

Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch no dear you have to fact asmd alone.. it is philosophy of life..one has to look forwar andmarchnot to waitand every opportunity is to be grabbed...come what may. have faith in himmand all be alllright, , , fine art piece of writng.....10 read mine you get lost..... yes to to... you go alone..

Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch well written poem with heartfelt exression of reality.. liked it and inspiring piece is this.. well done luwan dear..10/10

lessons in life; saddening for a time i feel this poem