Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain is like
a fire
the more you feel pain
the fire gets bigger and bigger
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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

pain something i know both emotional and physical since i was young and if you felt it you know the fire never leaves a fire i hate but know so much

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Riquetta Elliott 11 January 2008

I feel the same way because I don't want nobody to control me and my life. I don't want that to happen NO NO NO NO! ! ! ! So when I read your poem again and tell myself, I will be stronger. You are a true poet and I rated your poem a 10 because people can relate what your going through especially me. Don't stop keep on writing.

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Linda Weischedel 02 January 2008

Trevor: Don't give up on life now, you have an awesome talent for writing. I understand how you feel, I deal with deamons in my head everyday having Bipolar-1 Disorder. Don't give up man! ! HUGS 2 YOU, Linda

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