Friday, August 14, 2009

Pain Comments

Rating: 4.5

when the sun rises and night withdraws
Cold and in awful pain she lies
with her beautiful, invisible wings
not noticing that the bird
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sergio bruno
COMMENTS
Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

liked your imagination.giving the word flights a new meaning

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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

Intelligently written well done

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Keith Chapman 23 September 2009

well written poem...............9

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

nice poem, thank you for sharing................10

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Peter Percy 22 August 2009

very touching poem...........

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