Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Pain Comments

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Through my pain
And through my sorrow
My feeling must not show true.
Though it may tear me apart.
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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

Good work here Philip - pain can only be controlled for so long and then.. I like the nicely understated climax though. Thanks, Steve

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