Tuesday, January 30, 2007

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cant help to hide the pain you put me throught
You said you wouldnt hurt me
You said you cared
So many things still not there
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Shana Hamblin
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(: God's Wild Child :) 03 June 2008

its deep...good job. and stay strong.

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Emmanuel Jones 02 April 2007

You know in the ARMY they say 'Pain is just weakness leaving the body'.Yea but i really enjoyed this poem, reminds me of a relationship that was in.

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Zana Gg 18 March 2007

whoa i love this poem ....hugs Zana

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David Harris 17 March 2007

This is a beautiful poem, though sad because of the pain. Unfortunately love can bring real happiness, but it can also bring the pain as well. We've got to try and balance them out. Someone once wrote, ' if we don't feel pain, how will we recognise happiness ' The point is we wouldn't. Time always mends a broken heart if you let it. Every tomorrow will bring a new love. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poems. Wishing you love. David

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