Saturday, March 16, 2024

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain

So painful,
you don't feel that
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2024

Liked the first two lines of the ultimate stanza giving emphasis to the pain felt. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2024

So deeply poignant and touching and I can feel the pain that is vividly depicted in this well expressed poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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