Pain Comments

Your last line, also, 'needs help'. Who doesn't (need help sometimes) ? . Not I/me! I DO NEED HELP! HELP! ! ! ! ! ! Did I already welcome you to PH? Welcome. )

Your apostrophe, used in error in line 6, in your ' it's ', belongs in 'cant' to make 'can't' aka 'cannot' aka 'can not'. 'Cant' [ no apostrophe ] is a noun with numerous definitions.

'A nemesis from Genesis with it's excess fat in fate' Yes, a nemesis, and I like your rhyme, but ' it's ', here, should be 'its'. Right?

'chicks'? Human chicks or chicken....et al e.g. pheasant, quail, & turkey & even robin chicks?

Now, back to your poem! line 1: Are you saying that 'paint' cuts like it is a knife? I don't care much for symbolism. : (

'VIBE is a distinctive feeling or quality capable of being sensed' Certainly a 'bee' must have SOME 'feeling(s) '! ....unless maybe it's a Spelling Bee, agree? You are a 'new member' here? Welcome.