Tuesday, April 21, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Like a feathered arrow flying.
Straight and true but silently
Speeds the message of your dying
a missile you won’t hear or see.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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i have to agree with Catrina and Chritine.. Truly masterful.

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Catrina Heart 22 April 2009

Great written poem..............truly amazing........thanks! ! !

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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

Great story line Ivor, Your work is always done so masterful. I enjoyed the swifness of the lines, It felt like his heart was beating to the anger that he was feeling 10+++

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