Tuesday, December 31, 2019

Pages Of Mind Comments

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1. Learned from the tree, i know we wont always stay at the bottom, because root will push us up to grow branches and be stronger, and i know we dont always be at the top, because there is always new shoot that growing upper than us. But where we are now, is where the maturity and significant of ourselves to gain, to support the whole.

2. Of past, what's left for you is you, what you still have, is whatever you remember. How it birth future? Its how you learned from it.
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Denis Mair 10 January 2020

All these ponderings remind me of the leaves in Paragraph 5. The leaves are falling at every moment, butut each of them contributes by gathering light that the whole tree can use, so it can be useful to others. I like what you say about needing to place each experience in the context of a whole day or lifetime in order to know it's true meaning.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2020

VERY EDUCATIVE PROSAIC KINDA POETRY MANY LOVED IT I DID TOO READ SOME OF MINE WILL YOU FROM A SEED NOW TO 433/500 I GREW ALL BECAUSE OF SUPPORT OF POETS LIKE YOU

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2020

A poem of great depth. Wonderful thoughts imbued with wisdom and insight. The opening stanza is like a poem by itself. Beautiful lines that are so true and must be kept in our hearts and imbibe in our minds. The other stanzas provide wonderful thoughts to live by. A very inspiring poem beautifully crafted.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 January 2020

Every mind is a book in that a page is added every day, who knows when this book will be complete.

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Muhammad Ali 04 January 2020

Your work is amazing. Each thought is best. Your process of thinking and communication is very nice. Unity, enjoying the presence, journey is better than to stay regretting, friendship, humanity, many more messages and most important is to keep learning. And there a difference between want and need. I enjoyed. I enjoyed more where WE is used. It conveyed passively. Brilliant

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Bharati Nayak 03 January 2020

Sometimes we forget, the sand that keeps tree standing strong...we only look at how big the trees are, and fruits they have. Considering that we should never forget anybody that works hard, including labour and anyone even to the road cleaners, looking at their faces and hardwork... They deserve a huge thanks and appreciation, because every little thing is cared for us so we can focus on other big things- - I really love your beautiful thoughts

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Bharati Nayak 03 January 2020

Wow- -Such great and beautiful thoughts- -giving inspiration. Let me quote two of them- - Having feathers is not reflecting a bird can fly, Having a pencil doesnt mean you can write... Having a will to learn and to improve however will change them all... From " having" to " gain" . Abilities reformed!

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Mj Lemon 02 January 2020

A great work, Soul. There is something about a new year and renewal. There is almost a predictable pattern to what defines life. At the same time, all experience is unique. As they say, history doe not so much repeat as it rhymes. A perfect poem for the start of a new cycle.

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