Lust busy; lechery engaged too
On floor of glamour, clamour stiletto
Modesty roams free; under marquee
Long live page 3
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You have written out strong points in this. Your imagination mixed together with reality has created a powerful poem. There is a line of darkness that runs through this in places. Well done and nice work! Once again you create a talented piece. DC
nikunj ji...a satirical take on the page 3 life that is shallow from inside....beautifully done...10 all the way.
its like reliving all the horrible stories of Page 3 Ofcourse... well penned... :)
Values valued at the lowest Treachery held in esteem highest Honesty waits for its turn Gets only heartburn hard on rocks, life on a spinning spree Long live the page 3. A socially constructed reality of life, thats what comes to mind reading your poem. 5/9/09
This is all new to me and hope it doesn't travel to Australia. You paint a picture of soulless people with lechery, free modesty, and botox people. Sozzled is a great work and it means drunk according to the dictionary! The infection of the diamond ring is such creative imagery. Loved it! 10 love Karin
This is all new to me and hope it doesn't travel to Australia. You paint a picture of soulless people with lechery, free modesty, and botox people. Sozzled is a great work and it means drunk according to the dictionary! The infection of the diamond ring is such creative imagery. Loved it! 10 love Karin
the newsprint has to sell...for that the reders have to get stuck..and that really stickc
I HAVE JUST GIVEN MY COMMENTS ON OLFA PHILOSOPHY'S POEM WHICH RAISED THE QUESTION OF ROMANTIC LOVE IN OUR MODERN CONTEXT! JUST READ IT FOR KICKS! HERE TOO, I MUST SAY THINGS ARE NOT VERY DIFFERENT! WE ALL READ PAGE -3 BECAUSE IT CATERS TO OUR LOVE FOR SENSATIONAL HAPPENINGS, IN AN ERA OF ONE NIGHT STAND AND LIVE-IN RELATIONSHIPS! THANKS FOR SHARING! 10! -RAJ
Page 3 has much truth of the, plastic, fantastic, people of image world today.
Necklines plunge, Helmlines soar Botoxed faces smile evermore Sozzled spirits revel in revrie Long live page 3 yeyyyyyyyyy long live PAGE 3 one goes upwards the other downwards where do they meet? ? ? do you have an answer? whatever, a good satire A+++ anjali