Your days are spun with a golden thread and lots of fun,
You have an engaging smile like the natural warmth of the sun,
The light of your constant energy with your active mind so bright
In the darkness you shine like a lone spotlight,
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What a lovely scene you paint with your words, nicely done. Annette
You have given Padraig.... the young boy a lovely tribute! I am sure, he will be so delighted to see a beautiful poem written about him, even if he may not be able to understand the poem now word by word! As he grows up, I am sure he is going to treasure it like a valuable gift and remember you with great warmth!
This poem, Hazel, is a moving tribute to young Padraig. He is obviously a fine child, a child to make any parent proud. This poem is also, indirectly, a moving tribute to you, Hazel. It speaks volumes of the warm, welcoming, person you really are. May this relationship blossom and prosper. Well done Hazel.
Beautifully inked poem. It can visualize the suitable boy..........
Marvellous expression with nice diction. I adore this poem. The favourite lines are........Their love for you is like no other, You teach us all to cherish every moment that takes us a step further, To love with zest like opening a brand new treasure chest And discover your lovely nature in the comfort of your family nest, Thanks for sharing......10
A lovely tribute to a great Scottish player. A nice poem on a national hero of Ireland. although I am not much interested in football even then I have read his name, it shows he is really great.
Sorry Akhtar I should have explained in the space for who this poem is about, it is about my partner's son he is eleven years of age and he is an amazing boy, he brings so much joy to all our lives!
Wonderful write with great imagery and lots of feelings, Very well thought and executed....Loved it Maa'm...10+++
You are the like the Sunlight of every day Padraig you shine with love and joy In your own special way. Fantastic poem weaved with love. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.
The energy, the joy, enthusiasm, and curiosity specific to children, are all shining in this poem. A lovely dedication poem!