Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Paddle Me In The Rough Sea's Comments

Rating: 5.0

whew...w...whew....w...whew....w...so strong, wave beneath
in the high sea, take in the ocean floor, dive all the wind that
brings me near to the bottom vail, and show me the ocean rock
saddle in the sand it fall
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Antonio Liao
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Brian Jani 15 May 2014

Antonio nice poem I enjoyed it

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Kesav Easwaran 03 September 2008

a boat fighting out on the life ocean rough waves to reach that ultimate shore of eternal love...and a request to the Dependable Shore Owner to paddle up safe...good insightful write Anto...well presented 10/10

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