Packs Of Probability Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Packs Of Probability

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She sleeps for million years,
after making billion may be trillion
packs of probability,
and scattering it all over the universe.
Every living and nonliving thing gets a pack.
When population of nonliving zone crosses the limit,
it ends in a black hole.
When population of the living zone crosses the limit,
it being helpless in the hands of instincts,
fights to survive.
She awakes after a long night,
those locked in the gray zone,
neither living nor nonliving,
are unlocked.
We know like the nonliving zone this living zone is also helpless,
but,
being fighters we still fight,
hoping at least one of our family members,
fittest to survive will finally survive.
We are descendants of hopeful great men.

Tuesday, April 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2020

We know like the nonliving zone this living zone is also helpless, but, being fighters we still fight, .....excellent expression our best philanthropic efforts and fights will make the upcoming great generation

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A very perceptive poem woven by a brilliant and analytical mind. The last four lines are very touching and inspiring. A great poem embedded with powerful thoughts.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 April 2020

excellent excellent original sentiments sir

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yoonoos peerbocus 28 April 2020

we are descendants of hopeful great man sums up the whole from one perspective

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