Package Of Sugar Comments

I really like this poem and it shows warmth of happiness and you sound very dedicated to your poems. keep them up

For a reason I give this intention of no worry Never swim, but lay against the current... good lines. good job. Becca

' our on goin walk ' with a package of sugar for anyones interested? Nicely written Drake.keep it up.

This is really good keep it up! ! !

this is pretty good I like it Superb job yo!

wow that was good thanks for shearing :)

i Love This Poem Hun: ]

Very intelligent and very clever. Reminds me of the saying 'You win a man's heart by his tummy' But then it switches to something more loving.Great JOB!

this is a clever way of winning people. good write

Sort of like walking in steps