Saturday, May 16, 2009

Pacific Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.8

i wish i could swim the pacific ocean and back.

and when i came back to sit in front of a burning burning fire
...
Read full text

chloe young
COMMENTS
<font color=black>Nagourta 10 October 2009

: D How sweet.

0 0 Reply
Kale Beaudry 07 July 2009

Your format variety is something that intrigues me as many, many poets don't know how to accomplish that, when in fact it is this easy... you have a way with words, and I like the images you paint in my mind. Very artistic. Very poetic. You've earned a fan.

0 0 Reply
Nothern Cross 24 June 2009

I love the symbolic power of love that you created through the ocean. well thought of.

0 0 Reply
Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

crazy about a guy who doesn't give a s**t.......duh. insanity at its best....wht more can i say

0 0 Reply
Shy Beauty Raven 19 May 2009

this was cool. i prefer a pool myself.

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Not like a fast dip in the pool

0 0 Reply
chloe young

chloe young

Ireland
Close
Error Success