Tuesday, June 12, 2018

P+n+s Soup?…[ Inspired By One** Who Shall Remain Un-Named! ; S H O R T; I Mean The Poem, Silly! ! ; True Story ] Comments

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She came home (hint, hint) ** from having lunch with an old friend,
………..and, unable to bring her praise of the ‘new' eatery to an end,
she mentioned seeing ‘clam chowder', with VISIBLE flesh of clam! !
Well (‘after all')it WAS "clam" chowder, so it'd be not beef nor ham!
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Bri Edwards
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Mj Lemon 26 July 2018

Real life is always more intense than anything we think we can imagine. This is a terrific poem, Bri. Had me laughing from the first line....and perhaps even most impressive....The poet notes are themselves a version of the poem...a poem unto itself. To myfavourites! PS..I think Eric Idle would approve....'Wink, wink, nudge, nudge...Know what I mean? eh? eh? Know what I mean?

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Kim Barney 24 June 2018

There are many things I could say about this poem, but I think I will just clam up.

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Muzahidul Reza 13 June 2018

Nicely penned this piece as quite real from life, thanks for sharing

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Kostas Lagos 13 June 2018

, when you write a poem...you really write! (That was a deep philosophical comment) .

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2018

who, ME? i would never, EVER write such horribly disgusting trash! ! ! (the poem, i mean) . well, OK! , just this ONCE i did. deeper than the gorgeous waters off the coast of dusty, economically-burdened Greece? thanks. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2018

to MY MyPoemList. and to each reader [who leaves a comment] i shall offer one bowl of chowder; let's not be greedy! ! ! bri :)

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Douglas Scotney 12 June 2018

that's a well-known sp+rm-inducing dish

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2018

Douglas, NOW ya tell me! ! ! i ate a lot of that soup, growing up; i don't know where my mom got the 'secret ingredient', but...she did have five husbands die, before she married my dad. hmm? no wonder i produced so many sons and daughters so quickly! ! ! but i at least spread them out amongst three of my wives and a few 'others'. then the judge ordered the vasectomy. bri :)

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