Monday, September 21, 2020

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P.A.F

People are free
Free free free
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2020

27 times the word FREE, would you really feel free then? I have my doubts, but seen from poetical side, that might be so. The words in capital letters P.A.F. do sound good. I thought at first sight R.A.F. my three sons: René, Arthur, Ferdinand, but it is P.A.F. Thank you so much for sharing this innovative poem.5 stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 September 2020

People are free People born free But chained everywhere For the discipline of life For the peace of world

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 September 2020

Inspired by Hasmukh Amathalal. Credits Sir.

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2020

Freedom from whom bro? ? ? ? Nice poem.

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