P.A.F Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

P.A.F

Rating: 5.0


P.A.F

People are free
Free free free
To go up a tree
See what they see

People are free
Free free free
To make some tea
Sandwich with peas

People are free
Free free free
Free to be
You or me

People are free
Free free free
To go by sea
Or travel by ski

People are free
Free free free
Free to be Freda
Free to be Idah

People are free
P.A.F, P. A. F
People are free
Free free free

Monday, September 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
No its not the People's Artillery Forces...People Are Free
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2020

27 times the word FREE, would you really feel free then? I have my doubts, but seen from poetical side, that might be so. The words in capital letters P.A.F. do sound good. I thought at first sight R.A.F. my three sons: René, Arthur, Ferdinand, but it is P.A.F. Thank you so much for sharing this innovative poem.5 stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 September 2020

People are free People born free But chained everywhere For the discipline of life For the peace of world

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 September 2020

Inspired by Hasmukh Amathalal. Credits Sir.

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2020

Freedom from whom bro? ? ? ? Nice poem.

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