Tuesday, April 24, 2007

(p) 6 (Sufiyana) The Veil Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bathed in radiant light
Moon kissing my every pore
I sit still.....
Intergalactic silence
...
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Charles Garcia 23 January 2008

your bird is welcomed to my outdoor aviary nice write charles garcia

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 April 2007

What a lovely poem Tranquil? The captive bird unveiled and opened its cage, flew to the barren sky?

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Original Unknown Girl 24 April 2007

Love this TO, so very lovely, though those last 3 lines, wow you socked those to me, never saw them coming! Great piece. HG: -) xx

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