Saturday, June 9, 2007

(p) 17 (Sufiyana) You Have Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have gone
But You are here with me
I have abosrbed the fragrance of Your being
Your presence is inside me.My soul can feel it
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 14 June 2007

Add my vote to this one young songstess, this verse sings of the must fervent notes and is flowing like a stream unto its' river....

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Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O. FjR

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Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O. FjR

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