This is the land where citrus flowers grow,
where happy fishes jump in to your eager boat,
where kangaroos are humming, always on the go
and little dogs are killed by Queensland's nasty toads.
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Well, I liked your words and the message, kind of a prose/rhyme piece. And you said it very well. And RC is right about the imagry. Nicole? ? Well, just don't take her picture...
No RC, I am a Kraut from the old school, even did a stint in the good old USA. I like the Nicole Kidman in the movie Dead Calm, that did things to me and temporarily made me forget the celluloid love of my life....Kelly McGillis, now there is....(for another poem.) H
some terrific imagery- have you always lived in Australia? Do you have Nicole Kidman's number?
Sandra, I do not understand what you mean by prose rhyme. This is an old fashioned, all-rhyme poem. Last time I looked it was. And I would not want to take Nicole's photo, see below. H