Monday, January 12, 2009

Oyster Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

the love in my heart had a strange but long start.
just like an oyster starts off with a grain of sand
and others follow to give a helping hand.
so is the love that i have for you.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2009

that the world would get to know. because it started out very slow................ya slow n steady wins the race and heart too.... it sweetens the relation and grows in maturity to give enough room for people to know about it.....10 read mine.................anywhere..... fine without you

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Aww. this is so pearly.. I like! !

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Amanda Seltrecht 13 January 2009

I really like this particular poem. It was written with such thought and feeling. Keep it up you are great at it.

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Linda Winchell 13 January 2009

A different twist on this sea crustation. Ten! ! Beautiful! Linda

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very well constructed and beautiful metophoric imagery especially comparing the slow growing love to the slow growing process of that pearl from a grain of sand, a ten from me, great to read

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