Oyster Poem by Shane Markie

Oyster

Rating: 5.0


The world spirals downward in the confines of a nautilus shell,

Its chambered abode antiquated antedilluvian hell.

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The spirals…. Beautiful tropes used with ingenuity.. loved it

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Shivapriya Surve 22 December 2006

Hi! Lovely work, Shane! I like your homogenous metaphors that come together to create a marvelous impact!

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binary language 22 December 2006

being down a few downward spirals myself I would say this is quite fantastic

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