Thursday, January 6, 2011

~ Oxymoron ~ Comments

Rating: 4.7

Delight in illuminated darkness
Towers all occult visibleness!

We hear not listen
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Siddharth Singh 26 June 2011

Profound thoughts must have gone into crafting this art work. Truly remarkable.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 04 June 2011

wonderfully crafted, sweetly penned, what more is needed to acclaim your effort. great keep it up. Narayanan.R

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Ovidd 15 May 2011

Good poem! Your rhyme was maintained while maintaining your point.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 May 2011

chaotic harmony cloudy sunny honest money bitterest honey a good poem.

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Shadow Girl 10 May 2011

Interesting, cleverly crafted. Well done.

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Inirs Nas 05 May 2011

'We hear not listen See but don’t envision! ' aptly said, excellent poem

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Alexander Kumin 05 May 2011

There is definitely a lot of skill in this. Your use of language is very impressive.

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Jake Deeds 04 May 2011

Ms. Nivedita, Without a doubt, your work rules PoemHunter! ! ! There are people that have no idea how much work, thought, and intelligence it takes to to craft a poem such as Oxymoron! Brilliantly articulated with asdfghgjkl; ! ! ! ! You are one of two of my favorite poets on PoemHunter! ! ! ! I am anxiously awaiting your future art! ! ! Sincerely, Jake Deeds <

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Claudia Krizay 28 April 2011

Wow! This poem shows how brilliant you really are-I give it a 10- CAK

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Autumn Schwab 28 April 2011

Ver good loll like it 8)

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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 24 April 2011

Oxymoron is a typical feature of the romantic and rhetorical styles - the styles of the era of aggravation of social contradictions - R. M. Meyer )

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Arfa Iris 24 April 2011

its simply perfect. your use of words is just amazing.. its simply marvelous. it will be unfair for me to comment on this piece. its simply amazing.. gr8 work thanks for sharing.. LAUREL FOR U! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 April 2011

Excellent use of vocabulary to illustrate oxymoron in the poem. Once again you are innovative in your approach. Nice poem. Please read my new poems.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 April 2011

Excellent use of vocabulary to illustrate oxymoron in the poem. Once again you are innovative in your approach. Nice poem. Please read my new poems.

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Bert Bell 18 April 2011

I missed this wonderful poem back in January. It’s delightful and profound at the same time, and I like that about your work. You’ve achieved everything you set out to accomplish in this compelling tapestry of very well expressed thoughts and ideas, and well-chosen words. There are too many brilliant lines to mention but among the ones I find most satisfying and original are, Muteness of silence Aids hearing in essence; Inertic momentum Is speedy stagnation! It’s a wonderful visual poem as well. Very good indeed, niv, a 10

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Chanda Mwenechanya 17 April 2011

wow wonderfuly put...word in pure thought.

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Rekha Mandagere 30 March 2011

Contradictions in life is inevitable.You really illuminated our brains with different contradictions in well knitted couplets.It is really thought provoking and educative in nature.Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.Rekhamandagere

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Katey Busch 29 March 2011

This is really good...I love the way you added so much detail keep it up :)

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Jonathan Heads 23 March 2011

good contradictions, I like the fact you put an explanation to the thyme of your poem, it really added to it.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 17 March 2011

Lovely poem that is based on couplets. The poem is dealt with the truth of life that is itself an oxymoron. I like it the way of expression.

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