Oxygen (Monoku) Comments

I like the thought-provoking wordlplay here. I also like the term " monoku" for this verse form. I too have written straight 17-syllable short poems without dividing into 5- 7- 5- syllable lines. I invite you to read my sequence " JULY RAIN IN SEATTLE." Beneath the sequence I have added a note on this form of haiku.

A short witty write. Great piece.10

This is brilliant! Thak you!

Nice poem with good biology dear poet.Thanks for sharing.