Oxygen Comments
add hydrogen
in abundance
and watch
as Noah's boat
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Very short but interesting. Beautifully penned with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.
A humor with an insight is something more than humor, and so is this lovely poem.
fun.. whenever we have some space, command and time, there is fun, fun for the laughing ones. He says.. this all is wisdom that He shares or grants with someone on His own will. poem is beautiful Mark
Thank you so much, Muhammad. O yes...that balance between fun and wisdom...the essence of life.
Hydrogen being a clean fuel kinda fits with the powering of Noah's ark and a new greener beginning10....
Great observation, Simone. How is it that every or any Green Party has missed that insight with respect to that ark? . Thanks so much.
Thanks so much, Kelly. And you've just given me an idea for a line in a poem I'm working on...
Your poems float my boat, that's for sure! Brevity, well-chosen words, and a thought to offer for meditating upon or for googling the properties of hydrogen- - these things spell excellence.
Thank you, Susan! And brevity...yes, I wish I were a natural. I really have to work at it. The first draft of this was about three times longer...Thanks again.
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What fuels good humour? Wit, wisdom, and brevity, And when hydrogen is added, ah levity, But you no one can blame If comes there to party burning flame!
Thank you so much Aniruddha. And your observations...poetry, sheer poetry....Thank you again.