Friday, December 25, 2015

Owl On Post (Haiku) Comments

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Spock The Vegan 06 February 2016

I thank you all for your kind comments.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2016

Watching you with the muse of life. Nice work.

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Kim Barney 25 December 2015

Looks to me as if the owl is on a fence post instead of a barn, but it certainly is a beautiful owl. I know from experience that it's not always easy to find the right picture to go with a poem. Good job. An easy fix would be change it to: Owl on top of post etc. I have made changes to my own poems to go with the pictures I had. For example, in my limerick Lad from Monroe, he originally dropped a steel bar on his toe, but I didn't have a picture of steel bar, so I changed it to something else (a tool box) . By the way, I just changed the picture yesterday on another limerick (Don't go out on a limb, Rick) and I think the new picture is hilarious. See what you think.

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Spock The Vegan 25 December 2015

Good suggestion. I have made the change.

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