Saturday, December 3, 2016

Owl Comments

Rating: 4.3

Big psychotic eyes and vicious beak,
you convey terror to the lesser species.

Feathers askance like a professor's hair,
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Barry Middleton
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Soran M. H 28 December 2019

most perfect poem I have read abut an Owl, well done and thanks for sharing with us/10++

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 09 January 2019

wonderful imagery of an owl. nice poem. i really loved it.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 02 December 2018

Nice words. I felt a relation with the political oppression and struggles. It seemed like, when others are being a puppet to the leaders, you were strong enough to act as a barricade. Overcoming fears are stressed here. Owl always represents out righteousness.

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Rajnish Manga 14 April 2017

Picture perfect portrayal dedicated to this nocturnal winged beauty. Not so easy. Thanks. I alone stand tall in the frightened night. Unafraid I face your pompous glare.

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Barry Middleton 14 April 2017

Thank you again. There are several layers in this poem.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

This is awesome Barry! I love the range in your writing. We have owls in our yard- and when I hear them hunting, I always think twice... well done.

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Barry Middleton 24 February 2017

The poem is about both owls and predatory politics. I was thinking of Steve Bannon. Look again at the second verse. I was perhaps overly subtle but I like it just the way it is. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

Yes....I can see it. :)

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Richard Wlodarski 24 December 2016

Whimsical and profound. And shrouded in mystery. Like the wise owl, the poem exudes wisdom from a creatively clever poet. Very deserving of Poem Of The Day! Congrats!

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks very much Richard. Glad you liked it.

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Simone Inez Harriman 24 December 2016

Well crafted Barry. Congratulations for poem of the day. I think I would, like all those weaker creatures, scuttle for cover too...not being a hero of any sorts.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Once I was quite a scrapper, wouldn't back down to anyone. Now, not so much.

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Sandra Feldman 24 December 2016

Serious face, (That picture) Wise, wise Owl Only poets can decipher and describe, This mysterious foul. Which this poet has done so graciously, with excellent descriptive images and true poetic originality.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thank you for the praise. Is an owl a foul or just a bird with a scowl? Yes, he is mysterious.

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Bill Cantrell 24 December 2016

Nice work! I love the political element you cleverly linked to the effects on others by the superior power at hand, birds of a feather both political and of the majestic owl.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Stronger or more vicious is not necessarily superior. I side with the mice and frogs this year. We shall overcome.

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Bharati Nayak 24 December 2016

The peonage of mice and mute frogs hear Armageddon in your question. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I alone stand tall in the frightened night. Unafraid I face your pompous glare. - - - - - - - - - -Wisely penned.Standing tall in the frightened night.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Could apply to a lot of things in the scary world in which we live. Thank you for the positive comment.

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Clarence Prince 24 December 2016

Who, is all you say, Who will it be? Yes, that's the language of the Old. Thanks for sharing!

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks Clarence. Now maybe I can figure out 'what does the fox say'.

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Seamus O Brian 24 December 2016

The terror of unchecked power exerted for its own advantage to the detriment of those under the power of its rule. Truly a terrifying, yet commonplace reality in the circle of life, extending even to apex species. Well-crafted and vivid writing. Congratulations.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks Seamus, glad you appreciate this piece which was intended to be both whimsical and profound.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2016

Peonage! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks Edward - peonage is a good word isn't it.

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Tom Allport 24 December 2016

confrontation is never far away from terror

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

I suppose but terror is a bit nastier.

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Kim Barney 24 December 2016

Great poem and picture, Barry! Congrats on having it selected as poem of the day! This owl does kind of look like Bannon, and it looks like he's wearing a tiny bowtie!

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks Kim. The owl does look like Bannon or Bannon looks like the owl. The night Trump was elected I ran for my burrow.

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Lantz Pierre 24 December 2016

I read the poem, and for all the strong and descriptive imagery, I was left a bit put off by the poem. I am not a fan of anthropomorphization of nature. Finding the exact descriptions that convey the emotional element is one of the most difficult tasks in composing a successful nature poem. An objective depiction that creates an emotional resonance is a demanding exercise. I generally find it to be cheating when a writer twists nature, and exploits it by imbuing it with human qualities to achieve the effect wanted. Then I read the comments section. The last comment, your reply, insinuating that the owl of the poem is a metaphor for Steve Bannon made me go back to the poem in read it in that light. And BOOM! It's a brilliant portrait of a man. For me, making certain assumptions when dealing with another human as subject, though dangerous, is still much more acceptable than doing it with nature. If this poem is indeed about Bannon, then I think it's pretty dang successful (with a few minor changes to bring it around fully to that end) . That was the key insight for me to be able to read this poem correctly, and it changed my view 180° about it.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Glad you figured it out. What is the word for reverse anthropomorphization? Just metaphor I guess. I think Trump is a cowardly lion but not as funny as the one in the Wizard of Oz. Now there's an idea for a new poem. I'll call it 'The Stupid Lion'.

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Tom Billsborough 24 December 2016

This is the best poem of the day I've read. My daughter and son-law are obsessed by owls and they are certainly impressive with their deadly soundless flight, the owls I mean! Your description is magnificent and it is a very powerful poem, befitting this creature! Well done on Poem of the Day. Richly deserved.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thanks Tom. Of course the poem can be read as just about owls which would be a worthy subject or about predatory people. Or both. I am very grateful for the high praise you have given this work.

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Geoffrey Fafard 24 December 2016

Strength of imagery.Powerful owl stuff. Just love it. They are truly rulers of the night. They stand their ground on the outback roads of Oz in the early evening. I smile and just drive around them… Thank you Barry, a fine poem. Cheers Geoffrey.

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thank you Geoffrey, glad you liked it. Owls haunted the woods I roamed as a child.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 December 2016

It reminds me of the song BETTE DAVIS EYES popularized by KIM CARNES++++++++++++++ Nice poem.... congrats on being selected for the day++++++++++++++++++

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Barry Middleton 24 December 2016

Thank you Bernard, I appreciate your reading and commenting.

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Annette Aitken 04 December 2016

loving this discription..... Big psychotic eyes and vicious beak, you convey terror to the lesser species........and again great image to accompany your poem...

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Barry Middleton 04 December 2016

Thanks! I was thinking about how much Stephen Bannon looks like and may be somewhat predatory like an owl. Bannon is a very scary advisor to Trump.

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