Thursday, January 7, 2016

Overwrought Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where there was pain
There is only numbness now
You had written pages
But there is only blankness now
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Nosheen Irfan
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Pregnant with pain yet crammed with a creativity that is both compelling and captivating! From the womb of pain has been birthed much gain. Well done my friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Problems of the earth! Here to stay and learn. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

when a glass is filled it can't take anymore but empty

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Visions of eyes are ever wonderful. We need to explore and realize these. Fear eats away heart but we need no fear in life more. Very thoughtful poem shared really.10

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

Thank you Sir. You are always very encouraging. Truly appreciate it.

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M Asim Nehal 07 January 2016

Awesome poem...I translated this to Hindi/Urdu.....10+++

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

Thank you Asim. It is written in the style of Urdu poetry. You chose well for Urdu translation. Thanks.

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Galina Italyanskaya 07 January 2016

Despair is devastating and can bring real depression. Your poem expresses it very well. Powerful writing! Thank you for sharing, Nosheen!

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Nosheen Irfan 07 January 2016

Thank you so much Galina for appreciation.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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