Overture Pastorale Comments

Pastoral love baring its bosom to embrace. Shiddiui, you are poet par excellence. Your poetry is not only a feast of words but it is also a feast to the eyes and ears, Your arrangement of words paints pictures and also creates musical waves. God bless you. CP

Pastorale is fine. let me ask you one thing, do you observe nature all the time or you have a beautiful pastoral silvian setting in your place? it looks like piece of a panorama and the remaining missing part is left to the reader. i can see it in my mind. good write how are your Javaites. my regards tothem from kerala india. you have written great numbger of poems. congrats. jaypee

i've read some of your poems, i like this one, ..interesting form.

You captured a part of nature, as a branch of a tree with leaves.