Sunday, June 7, 2009

Overpowering Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

deep in the utter silence, the darkness carassess me
i feel its coldness creep up like a lion creeps up on a lamb
its passion for blood like a madman, it just keeps wanting more
i find myself passionate for the utter silence of the darkness
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margaret atkinson
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 June 2009

Darkness and silence both victimize human feelings and passions. Very well expressed. Best Wishes Naseer

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Keith Parsons 07 June 2009

Good job... engrossing, I fell right in.

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''i find myself passionate for the utter silence of the darkness'' well written.....10++

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