Thursday, August 30, 2012

Overcoming A Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

A sun is blocked by an accident.
My soul shocks and is almost dead.

The sky of moonless night
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 08 November 2014

Nice poem, rich images and poet's passion, ringing a note of hope at the end.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 08 November 2014

Beautiful poem with rich images being painted. Full and carries much in tunes and content, beautifully ending with a tune of hope and search for fortune. Wow!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 09 September 2012

this work is great and cool. nice mixture of different things those just bring us to the other place. well done, dear friend. Good job.

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Eindaray Kyaw 30 August 2012

So wonderful..so beautiful....so meaningful.....Actually I am out of words to praise you! !

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Zero Ro 30 August 2012

Wonderful! ! How to pack your broken heart and create the greatest fortunes? That interests me!

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