Monday, September 22, 2008

Overcast Skies Veil The Sun Comments

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Sunlight is intermittently dimmed
Then bright
Clouds of impermanence
Drift away in the light of your smile
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Barbara Villabol
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 December 2008

What great pain! GW62

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Rajinder Singh 23 September 2008

Your pain reflects some desires and wishes unfulfilled.This is life.Very good and touching composition.10/10

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Barbara Villabol

Barbara Villabol

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