Tuesday, February 1, 2005

Overboard Comments

Rating: 4.4

Early morning, while rolling rather sideways,
remaining for a minute on your side,
I turn my back on starched, but lonely satin.
It was to be OUR cruise to Vanuatu.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Amberlee Carter 01 February 2005

it's interesting and I liked it. but it really doesn't move me. Not the way your poetry usually does. Anyway, I think it's very good, just not up to your usual greatness.

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Rich Hanson 01 February 2005

You really were on a roll yesterday. All four poems that you posted were excellent

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Allan James Saywell 01 February 2005

Excellent herbert a short power piece, i loved it Warm regards allan

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Sandra Osborne 01 February 2005

One of your best. These three posts were each better than the last. I loved it. keep going.

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