Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Over Waterloo Relics Comments

Rating: 4.3

The green grass grows, 'tis scenery everywhere,
Underneath are soldiers fallen century's fertilizer.
The gallant heroes of bygone days now mere clay,
No names carved, and long blown far and away.
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2018

It's a brilliant poem! I would just quote the last two lines: Alas, many a life was wasted in flame, causing gloom/ In search for fame undying, only to find many a tomb....fabulous expression! Greatly admire the piece of work!

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Perdita Young 03 March 2018

Thanks for your up-raising comment, Dr. Swain. I am a newcomer here and I have learned a lot from you and other poets these days.

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