Thursday, September 7, 2017

Over-Tightening Comments

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Over-tightening becomes loose
Likely the pressured will resist
The screw its helices may lose
Limited endurance does exist
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Kassem Oude
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

Wow a superb poem, ESP liked the stanzas about kids attitudes. Fantastic rhyming way u said it all. Allegory metaphor crafted swell too. Kudos. Pleez do comment my latest newest poem too titled song of lunar lovers

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