Over The Years Comments

This is simply stunning Gerry and amazing imagery 'hills fit together, like lovers, their great straddling thighs clasping.....' 'like God striking a match across a cathedral ceiling'. This evokes such a dazzling image. I see Alison's comment and a bit of a story attached to it too! This is one of your very very best! love Karin

Stanzas 2-3 are quite fabulous.

This is simply beautiful Jerry - 'Sleep hums like a current through the bright steel night.' - gorgeous language! There is such intensity amongst your words, the vivid imagery creates the most enchanting atmosphere - every line is worth lingering over. I love it - gone straight into my faves.! Justine x

I remember this one appearing anonymously addressed to PO Box 99 Kangaroo Ground. I wondered who on earth might have sent it - then my heart began to thump. Your poetic voice sang sweetly that day. It's been singing ever since. Thank you my love. Your Allie Pie xxxx