Over The Shoulder Poem Comments
If I simply start to write them down
I know more words will come
Though I don't know where they're leading to
Or where they're coming from
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I really like this Mike.. It is indeed like this when we write.. The thought form in the mind begging for an outlet and from there the poem is born.. Thanks for sharing..
Thanks Souren. Sometimes when I get done writing something then take a moment to read it over Im a little shocked by what I read. It's as if the words were relayed through me, rather than being my own
We are not the author of our thoughts but as you say, the recorders. That is why it is so important to leave the recorder on, and transcribe what the author gives. Keep it going, Mike. On a grammatical note; Their, in the third line, should be they're- In the 18th line, there should be their. Horseshoe gaggle civic marmalade future opaque participle.
Thanks Kelly. I try to proofread before I post. But sometimes i aren't real vary goodest at it :)
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7/23/2025 8:54:02 AM # 1.0.0
maybe you're messenger of dead poets who left their thoughts floating around/
Can't necessarily be ruled out :) . But I find it unlikely. Thank you for reading