Friday, June 2, 2006

Over The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Way up high above we see the purity in the sky
A rainbow full of hope after the rain passes by
Shining in the distance red and yellow blue and green
Oh what a beautiful sight, that mankind has ever seen
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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David Harris 08 April 2007

Lisa, I just fell in love with this rainbow, it had a pot of gold at the end of it. A shining lady that glitters holds a pen and is called Lisa. Another one here for my favourites. Top Marks from me. Thanks you for sharing it my friend. David

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Jolanta Gradowicz 02 June 2006

Your poem is as colorful and nice as a beautiful rainbow can be, Lisa :)

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Tracey Collins 02 June 2006

Another well writen poem. rainbows are nice to look at.

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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